read your poems. please give them names. at least for reference.
i liked one about birds flight. its striking.also the one about fear. but that one is too sad.dont you have any hope in life.
please write more poems in the line of the former (if i may say so). because i believe that it has more art even though it too is very sad.
thanks for the review of my poems.can you point out the flaw in the poem across 'the night sky'.
i want to improve it.